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Sat Jan 24, 2009, 2:56 PM
OK, so I made some edits to my poem "Simple Pleasures" and I would really love it if people looked at the poem and left me some new comments. Be as critical as you want! I am looking for some tough but helpful feed back since I am going to be reading this thing in an English class where they will be doing the same thing. So let me know ANYTHING that you think needs changing or needs work, from the rhythm to the imagery or even a specific line. Even if it is as vague as "something about line 3 is a little off" it will be greatly appreciated.


Here is the link to the poem itself if you don't want to have to brows thought my gallery:

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  • Current Residence: the trash can next door
  • Interests: who knows anymore
  • Favourite movie: Pride and Prejudice/Wild Hogs!/Forest Gump/Across the Universe
  • Favourite band or musician: to many to choose from
  • Favourite genre of music: country....but not by much
  • Favourite artist: Heather, Katrina, and Andi
  • Favourite poet or writer: Margret Weis and Tracy Hickman/Robert Louis Stevenson
  • Skin of choice: my own
  • Tools of the Trade: My point-and-shoot camera

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=Wysseri Feb 1, 2009, 8:18:03 AM


Thank you :sun:

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=Wysseri Jan 1, 2009, 3:03:47 PM


Thank you so much!

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~BlissfullyNaive May 9, 2008, 2:44:21 PM
thanks. took me forever to get it to the right file and pixil size
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=MichelRajkovic Jan 21, 2008, 1:22:49 PM
Thanks a lot for the watch ;-)

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~BlissfullyNaive Feb 12, 2008, 1:17:45 AM
No Problem. You have AMAZING pictures!
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=thesassysim Oct 25, 2007, 4:53:51 PM
Thank you for the :+fav: you gave "You!" :)
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